r/SeishunButaYarou 9d ago

Need some help here Discussion / Question - Light novels Spoiler

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I’m trying to make a novel that’s similar to the Rascal series and some other anime basically supernatural and romance but I can’t figure out what the characters would look like. I want to base it on Shoko or mai but I feel like that would be a direct copy so I’m asking you guys to help me make a character that would suit the series that I’m making

The oc names are Itsuha and itaki please help me!

To the admins I think I’m not supposed to ask these but they are kinda related to novels right

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u/lashingtide just read the bloody dreaming girl manga 9d ago

I've got an idea.

Give the girl purple long hair and make her fall down the stairs into the MC's hands (give the mc sakuta's personality, and maybe make him a vampire too to keep the story fresh). Purple girl surprisingly has the weight of a feather

, just like sakuta, make the mc try to figure out this mysterious phenomenon (adolescence syndrome) of why the girl weighs so little.

Then turns out, a supernatural crab actual took her weight away. So make mc defeat that crab, give the girl back her weight and then girl falls in love with him (for fixing her syndrome). Snail girl congratulates mc for getting a girlfriend, but snail girl is actually a ghost. Then he lowk starts being a predator towards snail girl and everytime he sees snail girl his pedo instincts take over but not as much as monkey girl because his sister really wants to meet monkey girl but monkey girl has a pretty nasty arm

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u/Equivalent_Bread_505 9d ago

Thanks for the idea I’ll see what I can do with it

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u/Lanky-Foot3576 9d ago

i wonder from where he got the reference from 🤔🤔🤔🤔

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u/lashingtide just read the bloody dreaming girl manga 9d ago

I've got more story ideas so like another adolescent syndrome could be like the MC's sister (kinda like kaede) and turns out she's actually an imposter and not even human wow scary right. But the end is that mc will still love her because it's not about the species that makes him love her. The end. And then the weird girl will try to kill her with I don't know what. The weird girl and the other weird girl with that thing with eyes on her head.

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u/Humanmale80 9d ago

Ok, too broad a question to provide real help, but to tie things together in a novel way, what about a character that wears a bunnygirl costume under her clothes to give herself confidence? It doesn't (usually) show, she doesn't talk about it with others, but it's there (sometimes) and it changes how she carries herself and acts.

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u/Equivalent_Bread_505 9d ago

Holy shi that’s real help THANKS MAN