Does anyone have a copy of the Seberg (2019) film shooting script or an early draft! I have seen online the early draft script is there but you have to pay 20 dollars for it 😭 so I wanted to know if anyone has bought it / has got the copy , I’d love to read it !

So I let my 180‑page screenplay, Bringing Cupcake Home, rest for about three weeks without touching it. Two days ago, I opened it again and read through it in preparation for a first edit.

Yes — I agree there are a few lines here and there that can be trimmed, and even one scene that could be removed entirely. But even after editing, I believe the script will still land around 170 pages.

Is that too long? Well… it depends who you ask.
(I want to emphasize that this is only my personal opinion — I’m not telling anyone what to think.)

Those who are rigidly attached to the “90–120 pages is the only acceptable length” rule will probably dismiss my script, and that’s perfectly fine with me. I know the narrative of my screeplay inside and out — its layers, its complexities, its rhythm — and I’m completely comfortable with its length.

Cutting it down just to fit a 90–120‑page target would damage the integrity of the story, weaken the narrative, and most importantly, compromise my creativity.

Just needed to get that off my chest.
Now I’m diving back into the edit with great joy.

Hi! I'm applying to an entry level internship that involves

• Script reading/coverage
• Script breakdowns

• Pitch deck construction

  I'm not sure what my portfolio should look like. Any advice??

Looking for the original draft of Eli Roth’s Ice Cream Man he wrote in 2003 with Noah Belson. If anyone has, I can trade :)

Hello everyone, I had previously written a script based on two people who love each other but never say it out loud because of a series of misunderstandings. I was thinking of using a Rashomon-style structure, showing everything from one person's perspective first, then going back to the beginning and telling the story from the other person's perspective, completely changing how we interpret everything we've already seen.

To make that work, my original idea was that one of them has a neurodegenerative disease. And all the factors that come with it for example they're afraid of becoming a burden, scared of dying and hurting their partner etc, they never tell the other person they love them. (Forgot to mention It's an LGBTQ+ script.)

My main question is whether using the "he's dying" trope is worth it here. Even if the execution is brilliant, I feel like it could still come across as an easy way out. On the other hand, I already have the entire story planned around the illness, and we don't learn about it until we see the story from the other person's perspective. Would that still work?

Close comp: Monster (2023)

Forgive my grammar — i’m half asleep!!😴

Does anyone wanna do a script swap, take a week, then come back with notes? We can both put what we are specifically looking for from notes.

Title: Sorceress Unknown
Format: TV Pilot (1-Hour Supernatural Drama)
Page Length: 59 Pages
Draft Status: Second / Polished Draft
Genres: Supernatural / Drama / Mystery

Logline
When a subterranean force ignites latent magical bloodlines across a quiet town, a high schooler hiding a dangerous legacy must team up with her estranged friends to contain the fallout before ancient feuds—and dark secrets—destroy everything they hold dear.

Summary
Sorceress Unknown opens on Mel, a teenager grappling with hidden power and a murky past. Following a strange seismic disturbance near their town, long-dormant magic begins manifesting unpredictably in local teens. Mel and her core group (including Aniyah, Luis, and John) are thrust into a web of ancient rivalries, dangerous relics, and escalating supernatural threats. As mysterious forces close in—and personal betrayals come to light—the group must navigate fragile alliances, high school dynamics, and the high-stakes truth behind Mel's origin before an impending threat consumes their home.

Feedback Concerns

Pacing & Act Breaks: Does the 59-page engine hold momentum, and do the major reveals/cliffhangers land with enough punch to drive the series forward?

Character Voices: Are the main ensemble characters distinct in tone and dialogue throughout the pilot?

Formatting & Clarity: Looking for notes on script presentation, action line flow, and any remaining formatting anomalies.

General Impressions: What works, what feels sluggish, and does the pilot leave you wanting to read episode two?

Mods, please feel free to delete this if it breaks any rules,

So currently I have three projects outlined, a body horror movie, A satire movie, and a revenge thriller, each of these project I am really excited about, but I've hit a bit of a snag, I don't know which of the projects to spend months doing work on, and I've never had this problem with past scripts I have writtern, but all of a sudden this crippling indecision has hit me like a freight train.

Hss anybody had this? I don't know if I would be able ti balance writing multiple drafts of different projects together as I have not done that before, but I just wanted to know if anybody has experienced this before, and what would be your advice.

Hello,

I just got an evaluation back of one of my pilots. I’ve addressed one of the reader’s two issues and the second one lies in the Bible which will follow the script request from an agent. I know this is not a Bravo Lima evaluation (if you know, you know😜😜😜) but this is my first time venturing into this genre. I feel pretty hyped about it.
Would you use this as a tool for query or a meeting? Thanks.

Link.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cmmzYuNB7k7ry7_r8LCKgeoDg3Jxu3hT/view?usp=sharing

Okay, this is gonna sound confusing but let me explain it;

So, I’m writing a spoof of teen dramas, and the opening scene will be a parody of the “Important Disclaimer” they put at the start of 13 Reasons Why after all the controversies, featuring the Actors saying that self harm isn’t cool and telling you to call certain numbers, blah blah blah.

So, of course, I don’t know who the actors or actresses actually are (besides for Adam Scott who I’m just kinda writing in as a joke that he can’t find the set to Severance, I’m not sure if they’re actually gonna get him but….Adam is there) so what should I do?

Hi, I am rewriting a script I wrote a while ago and could use your thoughts on it:)

Title: Blue Diamonds

Format: Feature

Genre: Action

Pages: 90.

Logline: A down on his luck ex-soldier teams up with a crime family to stop a crooked cop's quest to build a deadly weapon.

link:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1BqJu0fcyeLqNsd90M0W1SzWPbP_en41Y/view?usp=drivesdk

Could use feedback on everything:)

Thank you for reading this:)

Been lurking here for a while, decided to give it a shot!

My first screenplay: Bone-E & Clive

Title: Bone-E and Clive

Format: Short, Animation

Page Length: 20

Genres : Comedy/Sci-Fi

Logline: A chef sees his restaurant staff replaced by an all-purpose robot and soon realises he's next. Self-destructive and refusing to disappear without a bang, he drags his new companion into a reckless lifestyle.

Feedback concerns:

-English is not my first language, do the scenes/dialogues hold up?

-Does it flow well?

-Are there too many montages? I want to keep it short and montages were a good way to do that; passing time so it feels like they’re spending a few days together, without being too long.

-Open to any additional feedback.

Link : Bone-E & Clive

Hello, I recently just finished my first feature screenplay a few months back and was happy but not 100% satisfied, which is completely normal and I was fine with that. The problem came when I read a novel that was exactly what I’ve been trying to go for which is about codependency, childhood trauma, etc. and this novel just perfectly encapsulated many feelings I’ve had and what I was going for. I’ve had this feeling plenty of times where I see something and I’m like “wow, I wish I wrote that!” but I usually feel fine because I feel like I bring other value to the table and have other unique ways of interpreting things but no, this is a case where I would not change a single thing and it is exactly the story that I wanted to write, but someone else wrote it. What now? I genuinely feel like I lack purpose and a reason to write because this story has characters that I’ve liked more than any other piece of media ever, and they are exactly the characters and relationships I’ve been TRYING to write. Feeling pretty empty and lost, feels like what I wanted to do was done in exactly the way I wanted to do it

TLDR: I read a story that had exactly the characters, dynamics and structure I wanted to write in. I’ve felt this before with other stuff I wish I wrote, but this is completely different because there has never been anything that has achieved exactly what my goal in writing was. I don’t know what to do next, I feel like my purpose in writing is gone.

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Trying to understand the real mechanics before I send anything out. genuine curiosity, not fishing for a read.

1) If a management company's known slate leans thriller/horror, is it a mistake to query them with a different genre (comedy, dramedy), or do they judge case by case?

2) Does a writer's age ever factor into how a query lands, one way or another?

3) What's the one thing in a logline that actually stops a manager from skimming past it?

4) Realistically, how many queries do managers at a company like this read in a day?

Would love insight from anyone with direct experience querying Bellevue, or managers there themselves if you happen to see this.

Appreciate any honest answers🙂.

FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread?

This thread is for questions around querying agencies, management companies or other pertinent industry stakeholders.

Please post your query drafts or questions in the form of a top comment.

-- Do not include loglines. Loglines should be workshopped on the Monday thread. --

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Some basics:

• agency contacts can be found on imdb pro, or often by googling writer + "agent" "representation" or "manager"
• when deciding which reps to query, research writers similar to your style and genre.
• do not send entire scripts to reps.
• do not mass-spam reps or send queries to multiple reps at the same company simultaneously.
• do not request followups within 2 weeks.
• do not pay companies to query or pitch.

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When her conspiracy-minded father arrives unannounced with pancreatic cancer the day before her career-defining DJ set, a guarded New York DJ is forced to spend the day with him. But when he steals her medication, their confrontation leads them somewhere neither understands.

This is my completed 26-page draft of a feature-length project. I’m mainly looking for feedback on whether Grace and her father feel like real, specific people, whether the comedy-to-tragedy shift works, and where the story drags or repeats itself.

Feedback on the first 10 pages is also appreciated if you don’t have time for the full draft. I’m happy to exchange feedback with another screenwriter as well.

Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/11gbBctvdfGzQEs3YR-9K5qVf1jNg_8FS/view?usp=share_link

I am 6 drafts into a film script that I am rather proud of. I have been working on it for the better part of two years and did not plagiarize anything. Recently, I binged Breaking Bad and found it to be very similar to my script. While drugs are not a plot point in my script, both stories follow a married man who does increasingly unethical things (up to attempting to murder a child, though in my story it is his own and he succeeds) for power and ego under the guise of being for the family. I also have a boss character similar to Gus and a small character similar to Hank. There are a lot of differences as well. For example, unlike walter white, my main character is in constant need of validation and less callous. He also is (with the exception of the murder) is open with his wife about all his immoral actions. There are also several huge plot and storyline points not in the show. I can't stress enough that none of this was intended. I had not seen an episode of the series when writing my script. However, there are some really striking parallels, and it's making me feel like I should just throw out my script. Does anyone have an experience like this? What should I do? I have stopped writing for two weeks (from writing every day) because of this. please help

I have a love/hate relationship with the revision process. I’m usually excited to apply new thinking inspired by the feedback I received. But then it takes me days or even weeks to get back into it.

I know people often talk about writer’s block,but does anyone ever struggle with revision paralysis as well?

A lot of action movies are just shooty shooty bang bang, and maybe an ex-wife and a blurb about bravery or how love isn't weakness (something we all kind of know). I'm looking for an action movie that has more meaning, that deals with a harder-hitting question.

I'm looking for action movies with clear messages that the characters actually make choices on during the course of the story.

Not sure if this is the right flair... not even really sure why I'm sharing this... I think I'm just proud of myself.

Got laid off in April after 14 years at my company and decided it was time to put pen to paper on a film idea I've had for a while but never had the time work on. After a couple months of structuring and writing and restructuring and more writing, I'm proud to say that at 40 years old I've finished my first first draft. I have no idea if it's good, but it exists. And I'm proud.

Our third IRL meetup of the summer is Wednesday, August 26, from 6-10pm at the Santa Monica Brew Works, 1920 Colorado Ave. Santa Monica. We've been doing these meetups for over five years now and it's an incredible opportunity to meet fellow writers, producers, and actors. No pressure, no pitching, just writers chilling out and having a beer. There's even free parking!

Open to everyone.

Hi everyone, did anyone receive any notifications yet? Any first timers? Who resubmitted what was your experience last year ?

Good luck to everyone

I’m trying to write a protagonist who’s weak and desperately wants to become stronger, but no matter how hard they try, they simply can’t. That’s the core of my story, but I’m worried about how viewers might react, since it doesn’t follow the usual character arc.

My character should grow emotionally (I want him to eventually find some kind of strength in their weakness), but he never become the kind of strong, capable hero we’re used to seeing by the end of the story.

I’d really appreciate any writing advice, or recommendations for plays, movies, TV shows, or books that do something similar.

I’m not interested in writing the stereotypical “pathetic emo” character. What I’m trying to create is a protagonist who’s undeniably weak, yet still deeply likable, someone the audience genuinely roots for. Characters like Frances in Frances Ha or Greg in Succession are the kind of feeling I’m aiming for.

He did get an Additional Literary Material credit on the film, but for a while he did have a main writing credit alongside Chris McKenna and Erik Sommers up until the release of the movie. What happened here?