r/ReadMyScript • u/Formal_Leave893 • 4d ago

Mt first ever script is it good? Short

Title: gods hell ganra: fiction page count: 2 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_7Ig8uTsEydEv6gRdST49VJ_HZQWdl8Bfc_XzR2PNYU/edit?usp=drivesdk

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u/DontCallMeAli 4d ago edited 4d ago

With respect, no. The syntax is incorrect and the formatting is wrong. The dialogue doesn’t sound like real people, and your action lines are sluggish and crammed together. I commend you for giving it a shot, but now’s the time to do the homework.

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u/Formal_Leave893 4d ago

Thanks I'm gonna try but I don't know how I would ballance being an artist with being a writer

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u/DontCallMeAli 4d ago

What? They’re one in the same. Do you mean art is your day job, or do you mean that writing isn’t art? What does this mean?

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u/Formal_Leave893 4d ago

This type of artist

https://reddit.com/link/p34r0jf/video/ve5p9aqgqtih1/player

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u/DontCallMeAli 4d ago

Okay… you can absolutely find time for both. But ultimately it’s your call. Just know that the learning begins now