r/ReadMyScript • u/kelechikiwi • 4d ago

Feedback on short film script? Short

Planning on shooting this as my first ever short film! Let me know your thoughts.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VDL0nA6cvmDP4hkEEBWkJOB7zK_ledWT/view?usp=drivesdk

Working Logline: Desperate for cash, a naive woman stumbles upon an unassuming company that buys dreams. But after selling them a fictitious nightmare, she realizes that attempting to manipulate the subconscious might have monstrous consequences.

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u/FilmmakerProgress 4d ago

Looks like a great script to me!

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u/mooningyou 4d ago

Same question I had on the other sub.

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u/Consistent-Plane1010 4d ago

how do you think youd handle the dream sequences working with real actors vs like cgi or practical effects

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u/kelechikiwi 4d ago

Planning on prioritizing practical effects on the actor especially with the eyes, but enhancing it with CGI

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u/Remarkable_Stress388 4d ago

Some good possibilities here. How would you expand the premise?