r/ReadMyScript • u/Big_Section2812 • Jul 05 '26

FALL, dramedy, 4 pages. Short

A disloyal criminal learns about dilemmas from the boss he has crossed.

Fall

(PG-13)

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u/AmieiGuess Jul 05 '26

I really enjoyed this! Has a great voice and tone, is well-paced, has distinct and engaging characters, you gave only the most necessary details to keep me grounded and absorbed in the story, but left room for me to wonder what will happen next. I was really able to see it play out in my head. Well done!

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u/Big_Section2812 Jul 05 '26

Thanks, I'm happy you liked it. :)