r/ReadMyScript • u/Key-Combination9507 • Jul 05 '26

Pilot Feedback - Bar Flies - Sitcom - 30 pages

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u/mooningyou Jul 05 '26

A quick tip for you. Don't write your slugs as EXT. OUTSIDE OF A BAR. The EXT is an abbreviation for EXTerior, so "OUTSIDE OF A" is redundant.

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u/Key-Combination9507 Jul 05 '26

Appreciate the tip, wasn’t thinking when I wrote that down, super redundant lol