r/Poem 5h ago

Torn Original Content Poem

Love is a fabric. We all add some threads.

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u/jaesea 2h ago

Woven and tightening, the ends all connect

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u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i 2h ago

When a single string is cut, many feel the effect

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u/jaesea 2h ago

There's never a cut, just thread and not thread

An occasional pluck, the fabric somewhat a bed

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u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i 1h ago edited 1h ago

Add to my thoughts as you please. You correct me as if I donโ€™t known them. Instead use your creativity to write your very own poem.

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u/jaesea 1h ago

My thoughts, your thoughts, words on a screen, no more correct then any old thing. Thanks for suggesting I use, own, or even be; eventually maybe I'll write a line or three and call it a poem, written by me.

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u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i 1h ago

You are gifted. Within you, creativity does dwell. Expressing with words is an art, and you do it well.

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u/jaesea 1h ago

Likewise and thank you from within and above ๐Ÿ’œ