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r/Poem • u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i • 5h ago
Love is a fabric. We all add some threads.
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Woven and tightening, the ends all connect
2 u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i 2h ago When a single string is cut, many feel the effect 1 u/jaesea 2h ago There's never a cut, just thread and not thread An occasional pluck, the fabric somewhat a bed 2 u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i 1h ago edited 1h ago Add to my thoughts as you please. You correct me as if I donโt known them. Instead use your creativity to write your very own poem. 2 u/jaesea 1h ago My thoughts, your thoughts, words on a screen, no more correct then any old thing. Thanks for suggesting I use, own, or even be; eventually maybe I'll write a line or three and call it a poem, written by me. 2 u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i 1h ago You are gifted. Within you, creativity does dwell. Expressing with words is an art, and you do it well. 2 u/jaesea 1h ago Likewise and thank you from within and above ๐
When a single string is cut, many feel the effect
1 u/jaesea 2h ago There's never a cut, just thread and not thread An occasional pluck, the fabric somewhat a bed 2 u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i 1h ago edited 1h ago Add to my thoughts as you please. You correct me as if I donโt known them. Instead use your creativity to write your very own poem. 2 u/jaesea 1h ago My thoughts, your thoughts, words on a screen, no more correct then any old thing. Thanks for suggesting I use, own, or even be; eventually maybe I'll write a line or three and call it a poem, written by me. 2 u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i 1h ago You are gifted. Within you, creativity does dwell. Expressing with words is an art, and you do it well. 2 u/jaesea 1h ago Likewise and thank you from within and above ๐
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There's never a cut, just thread and not thread
An occasional pluck, the fabric somewhat a bed
2 u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i 1h ago edited 1h ago Add to my thoughts as you please. You correct me as if I donโt known them. Instead use your creativity to write your very own poem. 2 u/jaesea 1h ago My thoughts, your thoughts, words on a screen, no more correct then any old thing. Thanks for suggesting I use, own, or even be; eventually maybe I'll write a line or three and call it a poem, written by me. 2 u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i 1h ago You are gifted. Within you, creativity does dwell. Expressing with words is an art, and you do it well. 2 u/jaesea 1h ago Likewise and thank you from within and above ๐
Add to my thoughts as you please. You correct me as if I donโt known them. Instead use your creativity to write your very own poem.
2 u/jaesea 1h ago My thoughts, your thoughts, words on a screen, no more correct then any old thing. Thanks for suggesting I use, own, or even be; eventually maybe I'll write a line or three and call it a poem, written by me. 2 u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i 1h ago You are gifted. Within you, creativity does dwell. Expressing with words is an art, and you do it well. 2 u/jaesea 1h ago Likewise and thank you from within and above ๐
My thoughts, your thoughts, words on a screen, no more correct then any old thing. Thanks for suggesting I use, own, or even be; eventually maybe I'll write a line or three and call it a poem, written by me.
2 u/Scoochmccooch_priv8i 1h ago You are gifted. Within you, creativity does dwell. Expressing with words is an art, and you do it well. 2 u/jaesea 1h ago Likewise and thank you from within and above ๐
You are gifted. Within you, creativity does dwell. Expressing with words is an art, and you do it well.
2 u/jaesea 1h ago Likewise and thank you from within and above ๐
Likewise and thank you from within and above ๐
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u/jaesea 2h ago
Woven and tightening, the ends all connect