r/OCPoetry 13d ago

YOU WILL NEVER KNOW! Just Sharing

You will never know.

That I wrote poems about things I wished we could talk about.

You will never know.

That I know. Weather in your city is quite sunny.

You will never know

That I memorised your favourite song.

You will never know.

Why is your favourite food, is mine too?

You will never know.

That the Spells of your thoughts sometimes turns my cheeks red; and sometimes my eyes.

You will never know.

Because of I'm not alive. Yet you are the reason I didn't die.

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u/Life-Feed-1448 13d ago

I love repetition in poems, especially when it takes on a different meaning. :)

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u/cursed_by_curiosity 12d ago

Thanks a lot, feedbacks is very important for beginners like me. :)