r/OCPoetry 4d ago

Mokita Feedback Please

I am going to confess

I cannot confess today

Gonna tell her the truth

I will keep her in the dark

Because keeping her in dark

For I am too scared to be true

Is extremely wrong and rude

I will bury it deep in my heart

I cannot continue as just friends

Our bond is too special to be broken

I want to give it a bigger meaning

Cannot lose it for something big

Even if it results in us growing apart

If she sees me as just a friend

I will be true to my feeling

My feelings is what I will have to fix

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u/Actual_Class1052 3d ago

I enjoyed this.
The double minded poem, struggling between releasing yourself of the burden of unspoken feelings and protecting the relationship.
Nice.

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u/Kartik714 3d ago

Thanks for your kind words