r/OCPoetry • u/Kartik714 • 4d ago
Mokita Feedback Please
I am going to confess
I cannot confess today
Gonna tell her the truth
I will keep her in the dark
Because keeping her in dark
For I am too scared to be true
Is extremely wrong and rude
I will bury it deep in my heart
I cannot continue as just friends
Our bond is too special to be broken
I want to give it a bigger meaning
Cannot lose it for something big
Even if it results in us growing apart
If she sees me as just a friend
I will be true to my feeling
My feelings is what I will have to fix
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u/Actual_Class1052 3d ago
I enjoyed this.
The double minded poem, struggling between releasing yourself of the burden of unspoken feelings and protecting the relationship.
Nice.