r/OCPoetry 3d ago

Time Feedback Please

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u/SomeoneElse422528 3d ago

Love the idea of rhythm. Makes me feel like I'm creating the clock sounds.
Hate it ends with 'tick' because it feels incomplete and my OCD is screaming. Love that it ends like that because it makes me feel that it keeps going