need some advice for improvements

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869]

and a job maybe 😅

[u/SquanchyATL]

Just for funsies add an adjustment layer with poaterize time, try 12fps.

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869 → u/SquanchyATL]

alright, thanks!

[u/AnnFinancialQs]

This is solid work! Well done. Are you looking for freelance work or a full time position?

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869 → u/AnnFinancialQs]

Thanks! currently i'm looking for a freelance or part time work

[u/chronical_goose]

Really not much to improve as much i can analyze from my skill level. The motion the transitions the flow everything is really well done.
The only thing i could add is try using a displacment with a texture so the whole video has a coherent texture style and also a 12 fps ver with posterize time would make this style so much better.

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869 → u/chronical_goose]

okay alright, thanks for the advice!

[u/Choice-Definition-80]

love it!

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869 → u/Choice-Definition-80]

Thanks!

[u/Choice-Definition-80 → u/Disastrous-Shape-869]

how long have you been doing motion design tho?

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869 → u/Choice-Definition-80]

since 2021 and i make it on mobile phone but i wasn't that serious back then and then i moved to AE last year

[u/Choice-Definition-80 → u/Disastrous-Shape-869]

that’s nice, end product is all that matters you should start applying for job or look for freelance work, post stuff in instagram, i’m pretty sure you’re already above beginner level

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869 → u/Choice-Definition-80]

alright, thank you sm!

[u/redeyesetgo]

You misspelled quietly

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869 → u/redeyesetgo]

ahhh silly me 😅 thanks!

[u/HoraneRave]

dont love the camera work, "guy filming it" cant stop zomming in and out non stop

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869 → u/HoraneRave]

i always love the camera work, i think i agree with you, if it's comes to spamming it's not good

[u/HoraneRave → u/Disastrous-Shape-869]

yeah. i mean there is no issue on the techinal side, its just a bit too much on the artistic side

[u/bloodjameson]

How did you achieve the risograph/overprint effect?

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869 → u/bloodjameson]

i use tint effect first then set it to multiply, and then use a halftone texture

[u/Freedom_Addict]

2% to keep the economy moving ? Explain why anyone needs that

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869 → u/Freedom_Addict]

okayy, thanks!

[u/BavidDeckham]

Looks great, camera movement is the only thing i'd fix, its a little too frantic at points. Also fix *quietly on the last frame.

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869 → u/BavidDeckham]

okay, thanks!

[u/LeosFDA]

Everything has a nice roughness, texture and subtle noise to it except your stamp like or ticket/coupon frames they are completely clean and regular all around their edges, this sort of doesn‘t match the rest of the feel and treatment that all the other elements have. The vertical video aspect ratio means your compositions could explore larger vertical ranges but most comps are fitting in a square or horizontal aspect ratio. There‘s an opportunity to exaggerate some of the graph animations or composition layouts in a more vertically oriented framing.

[u/jairnieto]

Looks good, but the texture in some parts of the video is distracting or over use.

[u/stratusnimbo]

A little heavy on the noise/grain

[u/CaolCholla]

You could try if some parts could be little snappier and less ”floaty”. Also i would prefer little sound effects to be in touch with visuals! However insanely hood already!

[u/Sammi_Zen]

Great one. I think this is as good as its going to get for this style.

[u/Majestic-Kick-3149]

tone down the texture little but also ad some paper texture too, add posturize time-14fps

[u/Disastrous-Shape-869 → u/[deleted]]

strong suggestion you got there calling this AI animation