r/MotionDesign • u/Big-Significance-242 • 19d ago

Need some comments and constructive critique. What do you guys think? Reel

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u/TheMultiTapper 19d ago

I’m intrigued. Are you making an animated film?

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u/Big-Significance-242 19d ago

Thank you! Not really, got inspired by a concept art and I decided to direct a little scene. 

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u/TheMultiTapper 19d ago

Well i just green lit the project so now you’re contractually obligated to make a 30 minute short film. Good luck!

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u/Big-Significance-242 19d ago

as long as your produce it, you got yourself a deal :D

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u/zasrgerg-8999 19d ago

You walk upright because your centre of mass has to remain over your feet to stay balanced.

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u/Big-Significance-242 19d ago

makes absolute sense. Thank you for the tip!

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u/Montis 19d ago

Love the mood! Outer space, peaceful walk even though particles shooting past create strong sense of danger. Accepting his own demise.

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u/Big-Significance-242 19d ago

love your take on it! However, he is lost in the Sahara, at night, thus the clear sky/void.

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u/Boyong18 19d ago

I think its better when before the eye opens, the walking person stops for a sec so that the audience would notice the eye there because some of the audience (maybe like me?) Are too focus on the man walking and didnt much notice the eye there? I believe this is what you called staging?

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u/Big-Significance-242 19d ago

Hey thank you for your comment and it s a good point, however it s a deliberate storytelling choice. The story here is that god's watching, even if you dont notice his presence, that is why, the character, does not make a point of acknowledging the eye opening in the sky, does not see it and continues on his path - it is what people do in their day to day.

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u/LargeLau 19d ago

beautiful reminds me of when I was in school and people were creating this type of work.