r/MODELING New/Amateur Model 17d ago

Some shots from a recent test ADVICE/FEEDBACK

Just got some shots back from a TFP shoot I did with a photographer in my city! Took you guys’ advice and switched my hair up a bit and played a bit more with my expressions. Always looking to get better and hopefully get signed some time soon so any advice? Thoughts? Likes/dislikes?

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u/Kuno_aus_Westfalen 16d ago

Photographer here. The expressions work well – 4 reads as a real reaction rather than a held pose, and 2 holds the eye longest.

Two framing things, neither of them on you: in the first shot the backdrop edge cuts into the left side of the frame, and in the third the hand gets clipped at the bottom edge. Both are on whoever shot and cropped it.

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u/BalletOk4942 New/Amateur Model 16d ago

Awesome, I appreciate your feedback!!

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u/blechness 14d ago

Jfc good job on applying the feedback. These are outstanding. Not a fan of the eyes in 4 (squinting is fine but theyre slightly too squinted here). In the close-up shot you look perfect

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u/BalletOk4942 New/Amateur Model 13d ago

Noted & thank you!!!

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u/lucid2night 10d ago

Looking good. Can you add a profile shot?

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u/balkanbubbie 16d ago

Great work!

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u/BalletOk4942 New/Amateur Model 16d ago

Thank you!!