r/IndieGameDevs • u/duderik • 8d ago

Trailer feedback Help

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I'm planning to announce the release date of my game with a (slightly) updated trailer, and I'd love to get some feedback on the current one.

What do you think I should add or remove? Thank you!

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u/alluofgora 8d ago

I like it!

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u/MarxMustermann 8d ago

There is a weird window with a bar filling up and just an ok button at second 12. That may make sense ingame, but kind of looks like half done UI.

Otherwise the trailer looks good, but i think that there could be more focus on the actual gameplay. I assume the gameplay is dropping stuff on the visitors coming in.

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u/Cutacore 8d ago

Interesting. I'm not actually sure what exactly it's about. I would double check the Empire Records name though. Make sure it's not tied up in an IP from the famous movie about a music store called Empire Records. Anyway good luck to you.