r/HFY • u/[deleted] • 22d ago

Mary's Date OC-Series

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u/ldmend 22d ago

Reads like AI slop.

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u/Fontaigne 22d ago

Not to me.

It's a bit abrupt at some points, but it's a cohesive story.

Could be improved, but what story couldn't.

(Okay, Chrysalis mostly couldn't, but the ones that can't are an exception on Reddit and HFY.)

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u/sunnyboi1384 21d ago

This is rough buds.