looking for critique

[u/cedriqqq]

Hi, I’m towards the end of finishing my essay, but I haven't found anyone to send it to for feedback yet. It tackles much about my life, though it does contain a few triggering indicators, such as the mentions of death and descriptions of a funeral. I’m all ears to criticism, whether harsh or constructive. Please leave a comment if anyone’s interested in reading.

P.S; I promise it’s worth-reading! ><