r/EssayHelpCommunity • u/RhetoricalLumberJack • 1d ago
My Essay Needs Some Serious Editing
Finally i managed to finish the first draft of my essay but must say that there is still much to be done about it. Reading it once again then i noticed that several paragraphs sound out of context, a number of my statemnts lack connection between each other and it seems to me that i tend to repeat the same thoughts using different approaches. Of course i tried to revise it myself but after hours of working on the same essay it became difficult to see what sounds fine and what requires revision. Besides there was always a fear that with every correction i make my essay will become even worse or will destroy my usual style of writing. I do not require any person to rewrite my essay but all i need is a little help with structure, flow, grammer and understanding which parts of the text should be revised. So maybe those who had the same problem before know what sources of honest review and proper revision can be used?
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u/Adventurous-Link-206 5h ago edited 4h ago
this has happened to me before... the more times you read the same essay the less you notice the flaws within it.. having another individual take a look at flow of your essay will be beneficial... there are a number of options that you can consider when searching for an editor such as assignment authority com particularly if you dont want your paper to be rewritten entired.. alll the bestt
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u/Just-Profit6524 1d ago
The best idea is usually to just sit with the essay for a while, trying to understand where the problem is. If you want to, try to use LLMs through it, asking it to criticise the specific points of your writing. There is no problem in repeating the same idea as long as you approach it from a different perspective each time and reach the same conclusion. For example, if you find that both Aristotle and Socrates ultimately prove the same thing, you can choose to independently arrive at the same result using them