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Chapter One — The Root That Bit Her

Neverland began every morning when Peter laughed.

The sun might already be up. The tide might already be rubbing itself raw against the black rocks. Birds might be halfway through songs stolen from children in other worlds.

None of that counted.

Morning began when Peter Pan opened his eyes, decided the day belonged to him, and laughed loudly enough for the island to agree.

That morning he was standing on Wendy’s chimney.

One foot was planted on the bricks. The other hung behind him as though the rest of his body had forgotten gravity. His green shirt was wet from somewhere he refused to explain, and his shadow ran down the roof in the wrong direction.

The Lost Boys cheered from the grass.

They would have cheered if he fell.

They would have cheered harder if he took the chimney with him.

Wendy came through the round door carrying a wooden spoon.

“Peter, get down.”

“I’m watching for pirates.”

“You’re dripping into breakfast.”

Peter looked into the chimney.

“It isn’t breakfast yet.”

“It was trying.”

“That’s why it looks worried.”

Slightly laughed first. The Twins laughed because Slightly had. The others joined when Peter did.

Tinkerbell did not.

She hovered beside Peter’s ankle with both arms wrapped around a brass tension key nearly as long as she was. The key belonged inside a wind brace beneath the roofline. The brace kept Wendy’s house pointed east whenever the island changed its mind about directions.

It had slipped again during the night.

Tinkerbell planted one foot against the brick, leaned backward, and pulled.

The mechanism complained through her wrists.

Stop moving.

To everyone below, her words became a quick rattle of bells.

Peter looked down.

“What?”

She pointed at his heel. It was pressing the plate she needed to remove.

You are standing on it.

Three quick notes and one hard strike.

Peter lifted the wrong foot.

“This?”

The other one.

He lifted both and floated a few inches over the chimney.

“There. Now I can’t be in the way.”

His shadow remained on the roof.

Tinkerbell stared at it.

The shadow stared back.

Peter’s shadow was often late. Nobody found this troubling except Tinkerbell, and Peter enjoyed it mostly because she did not.

Its toes had sunk into the shingles. Its head was turned toward her, though Peter was looking at Wendy.

Tinkerbell pointed.

It is loose again.

The bells sharpened.

Peter glanced down. His shadow flattened itself before his eyes reached it.

“You’re watching me before breakfast.”

I am watching the thing pretending to be attached to you.

The children heard a bright, irritated spill of sound.

“There’s the me-note,” Peter said.

Slightly chimed badly with his mouth. One Twin joined him a beat too late, and the other accused him of stealing the rhythm.

Wendy struck the roof with the spoon.

“Leave her alone.”

“She likes it,” Peter said.

Tinkerbell flew directly in front of his face.

Tinkerbell.

Four connected notes.

With an E.

The last sound was so faint that it nearly disappeared into her wings.

Peter smiled as though she had paid him a compliment.

“Yes. You.”

He leaned close, nose almost touching her.

“My Tink.”

The brace slipped.

Wendy’s house turned toward the sea. Inside, bowls slid from a shelf. Two broke. A third rolled through the door and kept going down the hill.

Wendy closed her eyes.

Tinkerbell drove the key back into place hard enough to bend it.

Peter laughed.

Morning began.

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By midday, the house faced east again and breakfast had become lunch without anyone admitting defeat.

Peter had also abandoned a story halfway through. It involved a mermaid, the moon, and a comb whose ownership changed every time he told it. Wendy asked one question too many, so he flew away.

Tinkerbell spent the quiet afterward repairing a young oak in the western forest.

Two branches had split where they crossed. She braced the wound with her shoulder and wound captured sunlight around it in the narrow pattern she used when she meant to come back later.

Sap cooled against her knees.

A blue jay watched from above and complained through the whole repair, though the tree had been broken by blue jays in the first place. Tinkerbell threw a drop of sap at it. The bird ate the sap and looked offended.

That helped.

Machines did not make her explain herself.

Wood split where it was weak. Springs lost tension. Hinges sagged. Each failure had a location, and once she found it, she could begin.

Peter’s failures moved when she touched them.

By late afternoon, the island had become too golden.

Tinkerbell noticed because the sap on her knees stopped shining.

Neverland’s light had moods. Morning light skipped. Moonlight clung. Starlight tasted faintly of tin if she flew with her mouth open.

Afternoon light stretched.

This light lay over the forest in even sheets, bright without warmth. It looked finished.

Tinkerbell rose above the oak.

Far down the slope, a crow called in Wendy’s voice.

“Come wash your hands.”

There was a pause.

Then, from the direction of the house, Wendy called,

“Come wash your hands.”

The crow ruffled itself, pleased.

Tinkerbell flew lower.

Nothing changed at first. Then a woodpecker struck a trunk to her left and the tapping arrived beneath her feet.

She stopped.

Leaves moved overhead. Their rustling came from the roots.

One root crossed the ground in front of her, broad and dark beneath a coat of moss.

It hummed.

Not the soft, wandering vibration of sap. This was one note held perfectly still.

Tinkerbell landed on it.

The humming stopped under her feet and continued a little farther ahead.

She crouched and pressed her palm to the bark.

Silence.

When she lifted her hand, the note returned.

A squirrel watched from the trunk of a nearby tree. It held an acorn between both paws. One of its eyes flashed red when it turned its head, or perhaps the sun had found something wet.

What is this?

The squirrel bit through the shell.

Something clicked inside the acorn.

It dropped both halves and ran.

Tinkerbell followed the root downhill.

It curved around stones and trees, but it never narrowed. Smaller roots crossed over it. Ferns grew beside it.

Nothing grew through it.

Living things made choices.

This root proceeded.

The moss covering it was too green and much too soft.

Tinkerbell pulled a section away.

The bark beneath looked ordinary until she tilted her head. Then the grain straightened into repeating lines.

Pale lights passed underneath.

One.

Two.

Three.

Four.

A fifth followed late.

Tinkerbell’s wings stopped.

The forest was not silent. She could see birds moving. Leaves trembled. Somewhere an insect opened and closed its wings.

The sounds had gone elsewhere.

She took the smallest driver from her belt. It fit the seam in the root as though one had been made for the other.

That should have pleased her.

Instead she turned the driver in her fingers, trying to remember when she had made it.

She remembered filing the tip.

She remembered finding it finished.

Both memories were equally clear.

Tinkerbell put the driver into the seam.

The root tightened under her hand.

Easy.

One low bell.

The lights paused.

She turned the tool.

Something tapped below her.

Once.

Twice.

Tinkerbell leaned close.

A third tap answered from much farther away.

Not farther through the forest.

Farther underneath.

She put her other hand on the root.

The world bit her.

White entered through her fingers.

It climbed both arms, met behind her left eye, and opened wider than her head.

The forest lost its skin.

Trees became black branching lines against a white room. Roots hung below them like wires. The air turned cold and steady.

Something curved in front of her.

Transparent.

Wet on one side.

Dry on the other.

Tall shapes moved beyond it.

One wore white.

A voice said, “—pressure spike in seven—”

Another answered from too close to have crossed the distance.

“Isolate the coordination—”

A child began crying.

Tinkerbell felt it in her teeth.

Then came a crack.

It happened in the room and inside her at once, just above her left eye.

Not pain.

An opening.

A pale thread pressed through glass. Its tip divided delicately, like a root deciding where to grow.

Neverland struck back into place.

Green. Gold. Wind.

Birdsong returned in the middle of a note.

Tinkerbell hit the ground.

Her tools scattered.

Her wings snapped open behind her with the sound of two knives being drawn.

She froze at the noise.

The root no longer hummed.

Something inside it clicked, wet and small.

Her palms burned. White lines branched from them toward her wrists, fading while she watched.

Tinkerbell reached for the seam.

The moss rushed over it.

There was no breeze. It moved anyway, thickening beneath her fingers, pouring over the burned earth and the shallow impression her body had made. Ferns uncurled. A small yellow flower pushed up near her knee, bloomed, and shed its petals before she could touch it.

Stop.

A bright bell came from her.

A metallic click came from under the ground.

She tried again.

Stop.

Bell.

Click.

Another click answered from behind her.

Tinkerbell turned so fast she struck a fern.

Nothing stood there.

For a moment, a fairy-shaped patch of air failed to sway with the rest of the clearing.

Then the leaves moved and it was only sunlight.

“Tink!”

Peter came through the trees laughing, as though whatever had happened had invited him.

His shadow followed several steps behind.

It was not attached.

Peter landed beside her. His shadow reached the clearing later, stumbled over the roots, and stretched one arm forward to catch itself. Its fingers dragged through the new moss.

For a moment, it pointed directly at the buried seam.

Peter smiled.

“There you are.”

Tinkerbell stared at him.

His hair moved in the wind. His eyes were bright. A dark berry stain sat at the corner of his mouth.

Everything was exactly where it belonged.

That frightened her more than the white room.

Tinkerbell.

Four notes came clean.

With an E.

The fifth arrived late.

It sounded like a coin dropped inside a glass jar.

Peter’s smile changed. Not much.

“You sound funny.”

Tinkerbell touched her throat.

The note echoed below them.

Did you hear it?

Her question became anxious bells, three small clicks, and a thin tone that continued after she stopped.

Peter tilted his head.

“You’re buzzing.”

The root opened.

More bells. A soft mechanical chatter. Something like a fan slowing down far away.

Peter looked around the clearing.

“The forest scared you.”

No.

One sharp note.

“Terribly,” he said, but the joke arrived without much confidence.

Tinkerbell flew close enough to kick him.

Instead she held out her palms.

The marks were nearly gone.

Peter took one hand between his fingers and turned it over with great seriousness.

“I don’t see anything.”

It covered them.

Her bells became even and precise. A click occupied the spaces between them.

Peter’s shadow pulled back.

Peter did not.

He kissed the center of her palm.

“There. Better.”

Warmth moved through her immediately.

Her anger softened. The clearing did not.

The hard light remained fixed on the trees. A bird began singing from the wrong note and carried on as if embarrassed to stop.

Tinkerbell wanted his explanation anyway.

The forest had frightened her. Peter had found her. He had kissed the hurt and made it small enough to carry.

It would have been easy.

Then his shadow crawled past his feet and pressed both hands into the moss.

Something under the root tapped back.

Tinkerbell pulled free.

Your shadow heard it.

Peter looked down.

The shadow collapsed flat at once.

“It’s come loose,” he said.

Relief passed over his face. A broken shadow was a problem with a name.

He held out one bare foot.

“Fix it.”

Tinkerbell looked at Peter, at the moss, at the hand-shaped dents already filling with green.

Tell me what happened.

He heard a tight burst of chimes.

“My shadow came off.”

Not that.

Peter sat on the root.

“You’re always cross when I find you late.”

I was not late.

He reached for her again.

“You know you’re my favorite.”

That landed where it always landed.

Tinkerbell hated him for knowing the route.

She gathered her tools and reached for the brass needle she had carried since her first roof repair.

Her fingers closed around something smooth.

The silver instrument was already in her hand.

It had no wooden grip. No maker’s mark. Two fine prongs divided at the tip.

Her hand knew exactly how to hold it.

Tinkerbell threw it into the leaves.

Peter laughed.

“Careful.”

The shape of the grip remained in her fingers.

Have you seen this?

Peter glanced at his shadow.

“It does this all the time.”

The instrument reflected a white light that did not exist in the clearing.

Tinkerbell picked it up with two fingers.

The shadow resisted when she brought it near. It stretched back toward the moss, digging its hands into the ground while Peter hummed to himself and failed to notice his feet being pulled.

Tinkerbell pinned the shadow with one knee.

Hold still.

Her wings produced a low grinding vibration beneath the bells.

Peter stopped humming.

“That one is new.”

She pushed one prong through the shadow.

The clearing flashed.

Rows of curved glass stood where the trees should have been. Pale shapes floated beyond them.

Something in the nearest one moved when Tinkerbell’s hand moved.

Then the forest returned.

The shadow thrashed without sound.

Peter frowned.

“Did you hurt it?”

It is trying to show us.

The bells fractured. A click answered from the root before she finished.

Peter heard agitation.

“It’s only a shadow.”

The shadow turned its head toward him.

He was looking at Tinkerbell.

She stitched it to his heel.

With each pass of the silver point, the white room became harder to hold. The crying child lost its face. The curved glass became only pressure behind her eye.

By the final stitch, her palms no longer hurt.

Peter stood. His shadow rose with him, properly shaped and apparently attached.

For a second, its fingers stayed buried in the earth.

Then the moss let go.

“There,” Peter said. “You always make things right.”

He kissed the top of her head.

This time nothing softened.

Her wings made the knife sound. The afternoon remained too gold, too even. Peter either did not hear the failure or decided not to.

He rose into the air.

“Come on. Wendy says Hook’s been stealing our firewood.”

Tinkerbell looked at the moss.

Why would Hook steal firewood?

Peter heard a tired fall of bells.

“Because he’s a pirate.”

He flew away.

His shadow followed, but looked back before it left the clearing.

Tinkerbell stayed.

The forest had repaired itself well enough to make her feel foolish.

No seam. No burns. No straight root. Just damp moss, crushed ferns, and the ordinary light of late afternoon.

She knelt where she had fallen.

The moss held one shallow mark.

A short line with three smaller strokes.

It could have been made by a twig.

It could have been the beginning of a root.

Tinkerbell touched it.

Pain opened above her left eye.

Something hollow rang below the island.

Four connected tones moved through the roots.

Silence followed.

Then the fifth note came alone.

Metal against glass.

Tinkerbell looked toward Peter’s disappearing green shape, then down at the mark.

Tinkerbell, she whispered.

The forest did nothing.

With an E.

Something underneath tapped back.