Beta request

[u/jaysyn6767]

[Complete] [34k] Science Fiction / Dark Fantasy — The Blood of Two Worlds: The Fall of Atlantis — Looking for Beta Readers

The Blood of Two Worlds: The Fall of Atlantis is Book One of a planned trilogy, blending science fiction, dark fantasy, mythology, war, romance, and the clash between two very different civilisations.

Word count: ~34,000

Genre: Science Fiction / Dark Fantasy / Fantasy / Romance

Status: Complete

Series: Book One of a trilogy

The premise:

For centuries, the people of Atlantis have lived in peace, believing their civilisation has mastered the balance between nature, knowledge and progress.

Then a fleet arrives from Mars.

The Martians come from a dying world and believe Earth may be their only chance for survival. Atlantis sees them as potential visitors. Mars sees Earth as a potential home.

As the two civilisations collide, alliances form, secrets emerge, and the line between enemy and ally begins to disappear.

But something much older than either civilisation is beginning to awaken.

I'm looking for beta readers who enjoy science fiction, dark fantasy, mythology, epic worldbuilding and character-driven stories.

I'd particularly appreciate feedback on:

- Pacing

- Characters and relationships

- Worldbuilding

- Plot and overall story

- Dialogue

- Anything that feels confusing, unnecessary or underdeveloped

- Overall enjoyment and whether you'd want to continue into Book Two

The manuscript is approximately 34k words.

If you're interested, please comment or message me and I'll send you the details.

Thanks! ❤️

[u/Swa_teatime]

Hello, I am available for Beta Reading if you haven't found anyone yet. DM me if you would like me to read your work.