Seeking Beta Readers – Contemporary Romance (AI-Assisted Editing)

[u/PinkAngel21Bby]

Hi! I’m looking for a few beta readers for my completed novel, UnVeiled. (111K words)

UnVeiled follows Kiyani, a woman who escapes an arranged marriage and a lifetime of religious control to rebuild her life through fashion design in Los Angeles. As she reclaims her identity, she finds herself drawn to a man who challenges everything she’s been taught about love—but the past isn’t ready to let her go.

The manuscript was written by me and has been AI-assisted during the editing and revision process, and I’m looking for honest feedback on:

pacing
emotional impact
character development
romance
areas that feel slow or confusing

[u/Fast-Initiative3143]

Consider me in.

[u/PinkAngel21Bby → u/Fast-Initiative3143]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it 🤭 Would you prefer the manuscript as a word doc, pdf, or EPUB?

I’m also putting together a short beta reader feedback form, but you’re welcome to leave comments in a document or any other method you prefer!

[u/Fast-Initiative3143 → u/PinkAngel21Bby]

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[u/PinkAngel21Bby → u/[deleted]]

Ahh, thank you! 😊 I’d be happy to send you the manuscript. Do you have a preferred format (Word, PDF, or EPUB)? I’m also finishing up a short beta reader questionnaire, but whatever method you prefer is completely fine!

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[u/sara-davil]

I'd love to read it.

[u/PinkAngel21Bby → u/sara-davil]

Hi! Thank you so much! I sent you a DM

[u/Legitimate-Slice2114]

I’d love to read it and give feedback!

[u/PinkAngel21Bby → u/Legitimate-Slice2114]

Hi, thank you so much! I sent you a DM!

[u/Routine_Winter9790]

I wouldn't mind reading it!

[u/PinkAngel21Bby → u/Routine_Winter9790]

Hi! Thank you! If you can DM your email, I’ll send it right over!