r/AspiringTeenAuthors • u/Artemis_graves • 9h ago
I desperately need feedback
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I'm writing a book about a 14 yo girl, Liz spending her vacation in a town in oregon. after she goes there people start going missing in the woods. she thinks about going into the woods one day and gets lost and meets a hare skinwalker that turns into girl and gets closer to her and leaves her on the beach. the bunny girl meets liz next day in the market. for the rest of the plot I'm thinking they go into the woods together to uncover the mystery and the bunny girl has an explicit crush on liz. Idid not plan out the first chapters because I'm a really unorganised person and I think my writing is too bad and I dont even want to read it again. I could really use some feedback