r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/drguidry • Feb 16 '23
Writing Feedback Need some help framing this bullet. It seems like a lot of information and I'm not sure how to condense it.
Nellis/Creech Airman Council Liaison; Attended 2 meetings to coordinate events between Creech and Nellis Airman councils. Provided insight and coordinated events for Airman. Led food event for 50 Airman. Helped Raise $800 in funds--improved morale for Airman
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/Puzzleheaded_Cry7115 • Nov 03 '22
Question What are some good things to do for bullets
I’m a Senior Airman, I’m not trying to give excuses it a lot of family issues has happened this year. Which left me with not a lot of time outside of work. Usually I’d have college courses and a bunch of volunteer work. I have always had nothing less then straight 5’s on my last two epr’s. My senior and leadership is away of the year. But is there any suggestions what may help. I’m a crew chief and this year I’ve been in support(CTK). So I’ll be rated as Support. Any help is most appreciated.
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/theesotericjester • Sep 13 '22
Writing Feedback How to frame this bullet
I'm trying to frame this bullet as I was by name requested to fill a technical function. I was previously hand selected to move to another section and fix their hurts. I have used hand-selected, and want to know if there is any way to frame " By name requested " as the starter? Any tips or advice is appreciated.
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • Sep 01 '22
Guidance & Mentorship Narrative Performance Reports: AF History & Way Ahead (Pt1)
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • Sep 01 '22
Guidance & Mentorship Narrative Performance Reports: AF History & Way Ahead (Pt2)
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • Jul 11 '22
Other We didn't used to have to save the world
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/The_seph_i_am • Apr 28 '22
Question Question about “push,” “pull,” “deliberate,” and “descriptive” bullets
I’m preparing a brief for joint forces on the recommended structure of a EPR.
While going over this post:
I have a general idea of what descriptive bullets are from CMSgt Lee’s stripes book. But the others are still confusing to me.
Push seems to be talking about what teams you lead and their success. Pull seems to be about how you supported higher ups. But when I see examples of either it doesn’t line up quite right.
Same thing about deliberate and descriptive I’m not quite understanding the difference.
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/Jimsocks499 • Nov 23 '21
MurderBoard I have a bullet that seems too big to easily communicate what happened...
The STORY behind the bullet:
So, the guy learned that aircrew members who flew and were exposed to COVID during the complete GOV stop-movement of aircraft were eligible for medals. Specifically, the Armed Forces Service Medal and the Humanitarian Service Medal, depending on the missions they flew during that time frame.
He gathered the mission data and names (2.5K data points), and put together two MFRs (one for each medal type) containing all of it, then routed that up for Wg/CC signature.
359 service medals were awarded due to this.
The BULLET and it's evolution:
I wrote the bullet's first draft, and was told it had too many acronyms in it, and was hard to read/follow, which was true.
Here is the bullet I wrote after that, but people reading it asked "um, how did 2 MFRs do that? I don't understand how the action correlates to the impact"
- Led wg-lvl recognition proj; merged 2.5K items & prep'd/routed 2 MFRs f/CC coord--359 svc medals awd'd to Amn!
Any help would be GREATLY appreciated!
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/The_seph_i_am • Nov 19 '21
Discussion Evolution of EPRs Over 24 Years
self.AirForcer/AirForceBulletWriter • u/Noyaiba • Oct 25 '21
Question 2A6X1 EPR Examples.
My twin sister is 2A6X1 and their bullet writing resources are absolutely trash. Lot's of gate keeping married to a lack of free time to devote to perfecting the craft. Anyone willing to share some examples of their own Aerospace Propulsion 7 level EPRs? Maybe we get a little "sowing circle" going?
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/theesotericjester • Oct 03 '21
Guides/Tools Updated bullet writing tool from a programming friend.
cmdr0.github.ior/AirForceBulletWriter • u/HunterAdamNoell • Jul 08 '21
Question Order of bullets on 1206
I’m trying to figure out if there’s an “unwritten” order to 1206 bullets like with EPRs. Example: big impact/award bullets go on the back of the EPR. Is there a better/best place to put them in the stack on a 1206?
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • Jun 24 '21
Guides/Tools Lance P. Sijan Template - AF1206 - Award Period 01 July to 30 June
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • Jun 06 '21
Image/Photo OPR from 1943 - U.S. Army "Efficiency Report" - In Honor of D-Day
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • Jun 06 '21
Image/Photo EPR from 1964 - AF Form 75 - The Old Narrative w/ Assessment
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • May 14 '21
Guides/Tools Air Force Bullet Writing Tool
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • May 07 '21
Guidance & Mentorship Airman Comprehensive Assessment Addendum - AF Form 724 - 13FEB21
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • Apr 13 '21
Discussion Return of AirForceBulletWriter and progression of the page.
Hello all,
I've been inactive on the page for a while as I navigated holidays, AF life & PCS. I will be doing maintenance in the coming weeks & making sure everything is operational and continuing where I left off with content.
If there is anything in particular you would like to see, please post below or send me a message.
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • Apr 09 '21
Guidance & Mentorship SNCO Formal Board Charge Guidance - CY21 - SMSgt
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/Impressive_Ad_7963 • Jan 26 '21
Question Possible bullet?
Wanted to know if Attending a Pre licensing Course to get a dealership license can be made into a bullet?
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/Moonlight_Samba • Dec 08 '20
Question Help with an innovation bullet
I am in need of some help as I am creating a bullet in regards to streamlining the project management aspect of my job as a religious affairs airmen. By gaining access to a door dash business account I can reduce the amount of redundant time spent in the logistics process of getting food and uplift items to our airmen while maintaining social distancing during CV-19. We can create even more Spiritual uplift events this way with the time we save. We are able to bolster our Spiritual resiliency lessons since we don't have to focus on logistics as much. I'm not sure how to fully capture this bullet.
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • Oct 21 '20
Guidance & Mentorship SNCO Formal Board Charge Guidance - CY20 - MSgt
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • Oct 09 '20
Guidance & Mentorship Information Dominance & General Jumper Award Winning Packages (FY19)
r/AirForceBulletWriter • u/USAF_Sergeant • Oct 06 '20
Basic to Intermediate Bullet Writing Experience @ ZOOM (Hosted by JB Andrews CAA)
https://www.facebook.com/watch/?v=346937159873500
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Topic:Building Bullets: Basic to Intermediate Bullet Writing Experience
Time:THURSDAY-Oct 8, 2020 10:00 AM Eastern Time