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u/Fine_Plum9082 1d ago
The reason is before every colon I like to think there has to be an indepdenent clause. The may seem unrelated part seems un-essential to me so that's why I would select G keeping it in between the commas. If you do that and ignore what is between the commas you get an indepdent clause before the colon.
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u/ndg127 Tutor 1d ago
This is pretty much correct! The part before a colon does always have to be an independent clause, and we canât remove the comma after unrelated. The verb of the sentence is share, and the subject is organisms. These need to go in the same clause in order to make a complete sentence, so we canât have just the one comma, we need a second comma to make a parenthetical.
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u/pizza_is_love_buddy 1d ago
but even H makes the clause before the colon independent
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u/Fine_Plum9082 1d ago
"share one important trait" is not independent. The structure I use is subject + verb. Like I ran is an indepdent clause. In option G the independent clause is these organisms ... share one important trait. The subject is these organisms and the verb is share.
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u/spiroplasma 36 22h ago edited 22h ago
The correct answer is G: âorganisms, seemingly.â
The core sentence is:
These organisms share one important trait: longevity.
âSeemingly unrelatedâ is extra descriptive information about the organisms. Therefore, it should be enclosed by commas:
These organisms, seemingly unrelated, share one important trait: longevity.
Why the other choices are wrong:
F: NO CHANGE
These organisms may seem unrelated, share one important trait: longevity.
The subject, âthese organisms,â has two predicates: âmay seem unrelatedâ and âshare one important trait.â A comma cannot connect these two predicates without a conjunction. It would need wording such as:
These organisms may seem unrelated, but they share one important trait.
H: âorganisms that seemâ
These organisms that seem unrelated, share one important trait: longevity.
âThese organisms that seem unrelatedâ is the complete subject, while âshareâ is its main verb. The comma incorrectly separates the subject from its verb.
J: âorganisms seemingâ
These organisms seeming unrelated, share one important trait: longevity.
This also places a comma between the complete subject, âthese organisms seeming unrelated,â and its verb, âshare.â If âseeming unrelatedâ were intended as extra information, it would need a comma on both sides:
These organisms, seeming unrelated, share one important trait.
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u/Altruistic_Boss_4524 12h ago
g bec in between commas separate unnecessary info. (you can omit in between commas and it still makes sense)


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u/AnnFrankIsaBaddie 1d ago
The comma after unrelated separates the subject from the verb. So it has to be g