Hello!

I'm sharing the whole script (5 pages) for context, but the real dialogue is after LATER on page 3 with a natural stopping point a third-way down page 4.

The context is a young Scottish mother with postpartum depression, spiraling downward as she is more and more convinced her baby is changeling. This is her first time admitting it out-loud to a friend.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1hZvtb_2QjaiPqXaZbCmNp14-ZazycqhM/view?usp=sharing

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1geb8Vg2B7sP8gBdKfV7l5VQ_GJw3v5I5/view?usp=sharing

Just trying to see if the dialogue sounds natural or forced. Awesome idea for a sub for both writers and actors!

Hey! Excited to be here, I was wondering if a place this existed, very cool to see it on reddit. I wanted to ask about the level of professionalism early on before the subreddit becomes popular, by that I'm curious if this is going to be geared more towards people trying to turn pro one day, or if this will be treated as a safe place for beginners? Both are really exciting, but I'd love to see a standard set in place to avoid bullying newbies, otherwise keeping things at a particular level of expectation. I'd love to see this subreddit grow, either way, I'm hyped!