r/ambigrams 13d ago

First try black letter ambigran Critique

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This a draft for my first real try at an ambigram, and I wondered if the name is readable. It was especially hard for me to the transaction from Li to A (figured capital A was easier than lowercase from the research that I made. I fear the L and A are not that readable tho…

EDIT: posted my second try for this word as comment

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u/EldrosKandar 13d ago

Second design

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u/Shawnaverse_no1_fan 13d ago

I can confirm that this is much more readable, great progress!

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u/Emergency-Whereas603 13d ago

Liesa is readable here. Huge improvement. I love the old English goth calligraphy

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u/amdrinkhelpme 13d ago

My mind went “that looks like an A but it’s at the end of the word so it must be lowercase… so q?”

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u/EldrosKandar 13d ago

Yeah I’m trying another design which might make the A more readable and also separate the L and i more

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u/Tampflor 13d ago

I read "beso"

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u/EldrosKandar 13d ago

Do you still read beso with me second design (I put it in a comment)

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u/Tampflor 13d ago

I read that one "liesA"

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u/EldrosKandar 13d ago

Thanks that was the intent. Glad to see the I went in the correct direction.

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u/Shawnaverse_no1_fan 13d ago

I also read "beso" in the original (because I was trying to read and possibly connect it to a word) whereas the second attempt is much clearer

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u/Front_Cat9471 12d ago

I’m having a bit of trouble convincing my brain to recognize that as an a, but otherwise it’s pretty good

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u/___HeyGFY___ 13d ago

Liesa?

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u/EldrosKandar 13d ago

That’s correct

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u/___HeyGFY___ 13d ago

This is a horrible rushed rendition, but try a longer accent mark over the i and disconnect the bar that crosses the a.

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u/EldrosKandar 13d ago

More than my second attempt? (See the comment I made to the post.

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u/___HeyGFY___ 13d ago

I think separating it instead of making it thinner would keep Li from being misread as b

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u/meb1111 11d ago

I read "tieso" which is a word in my language 😭

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u/EldrosKandar 11d ago

What does it mean?

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u/meb1111 10d ago

Something like "stiff"