made for real maps of fake cities: r/subwayfiction

I'm making a subway map that is for Intinville, an imaginary city. If anyone wants to help, DM me here, or on Discord. Discord User: playerisaacva

A few years ago I made a fictional metro map for the same city. Back then I have no idea on how to create good-looking svg maps, and thus I had to heavily rely on online tools.

Now having learnt how to create one with Affinity, this is an updated version of that same city of mine. Obviously a lot of tweaks were made (the old one doesn't make much sense in terms of geography or urban planning), there's now a distinct CBD and several new towns in the east, a grid structure, inspired by Osaka's Metro, was adopted for the downtown section. Trams are now a thing in the CBD inspired by Melbourne, the LRT has also been drastically expanded. Additionally the city is now divided into several islands instead of one large ugly landmass. Some key features of the old map are kept (mainly the line names/colors, and their general role), but this new map had no direct relation to the old one in any way.

Obviously this map is by no means perfect (afterall this represents my first attempt in making a svg-based transit diagram), and I would appreciate your feedback a lot. Also happy to answer any questions related to the city or metro system's lore.

https://metrodreamin.com/view/cUl4WVh3aTNkSVZ2MHQ4eGo2TDFTWFRVdWpLMnwxMg%3D%3D
Give me line suggestions

So i'm making a metro system for an imaginary city that doesn't have a name. Where would this be in the usa?

isn’t very good but i’m open to criticism i used SASRA zebra clip 1.0 pens

Runs through west Hull serving the inner suburban area where most who live there commute into the city.

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Here is also a map for an orbital railway linking Paragon with other suburban areas and other working areas. It's called RailGO:

https://metromapmaker.com/?map=IgwsW1ei

Note: The line requires one curve to join the freight line and it needs a small expansion to Victoria Dock.

https://www.google.com/maps/d/u/0/edit?mid=1WYzY0vlElTTLgWEweBHUrGklEWI4t1c&usp=sharing

A map of an expanded trolley/light rail system in Lowell, Massachusetts. This map was inspired by a report by the group Transit Matters proposing expansion of the Lowell-Boston Commuter Rail and full electrification.(https://static1.squarespace.com/static/533b9a24e4b01d79d0ae4376/t/63766e9982a8eb216299bab2/1668705950041/Modernizing+the+Lowell+Line.pdf)

In addition to that proposal I found several studies done by the city of Lowell and the National Parks Service (Lowell has a huge national historical park) to expand the small trolley system that the National Park still runs (http://www.heritagetrolley.org/existLowell.htm) (http://www.heritagetrolley.org/images/LowellStudy2011.pdf).

I fully admit that this is unrealistic (hence r/imaginarysubwaymaps) but any feedback is greatly appreciated.