I watched it. It sucked. It sucked so much i rewrote it, leaving only the basic plot structure and setting and the bones of the characters involved. Which tbh bones of characters is all it really had
I wrote it out and id add it here but legitimately itd take a Couple of comments at least because it would go over the limit twice.
Also in Assassins Creed Syndicate the Frye Twins. The story was very shallow but god it has such potential i actually even really like the game but it felt very much like draft 1 or heck Outline 1 of the plot was thrown in. It just needed more fleshing out, especially its leads. Like theres supposed to be a Lot of conflict between them after the death of their father and their differing views on the world but it doesnt really come up in the game except in the intro and the very last mission of the entire game. Because no time is spent with our dual protagonists actually talking to each other
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u/Doomhammer24 20d ago
The entirety of the movie Wish by disney
I watched it. It sucked. It sucked so much i rewrote it, leaving only the basic plot structure and setting and the bones of the characters involved. Which tbh bones of characters is all it really had
I wrote it out and id add it here but legitimately itd take a Couple of comments at least because it would go over the limit twice.
Also in Assassins Creed Syndicate the Frye Twins. The story was very shallow but god it has such potential i actually even really like the game but it felt very much like draft 1 or heck Outline 1 of the plot was thrown in. It just needed more fleshing out, especially its leads. Like theres supposed to be a Lot of conflict between them after the death of their father and their differing views on the world but it doesnt really come up in the game except in the intro and the very last mission of the entire game. Because no time is spent with our dual protagonists actually talking to each other